Lawyerman's Reviews

[She's in my Class]

Good animation but still little short

Title tells most of it. However, I really couldn't tell whether the girl was scared or if the dark one smelled so bad that it was messing with the other girl's breathing, hence it being heavy. Maybe I'm slow, but more might've been done to convey fear. I also am interested in helping out with voices if need be.

[Metroid: Bioweapons]

Good stuff

That does explain some things about why these ships always seem to have problems. While it wasn't the best material, it was something that I haven't heard before that was funny. When you see the same jokes about metroid, it's nice to hear something new.
If you wanted to expand on this, you could fit a purpose to most of the biomonsters and how they failed at what they did. Now that I think about it though, that sounds like the robot masters in megaman....

Anyways, good stuff. Look forward to more. Best part was "At least add some chainsaws."

[Ninja versus demon]

Good first

This reminded Lawyerman alot of stick figure fighting except more detailed. While it was a little rough, the animation was still really good for what it was attempting. Lawyerman recommends keep honing those animation skills. He thinks you can be a main contributer to this site.

[M-Bot The Game]

Good game but one glitch

Very well done game. The graphics were nice and smooth, the enemies were well designed, and it was fun. A few things

1) Mention somewhere that just missing the enemy will reset your combo meter. I would be keeping one guy in the air but miss one shot and restart the combo meter.

2) I think I saw that shooting another enemy while juggling one will also reset the combo meter. Is there a way to juggle both and keep the combo going?

3) Rare glitch occurs at the boss (or maybe during regular game) that if you shoot the gun right as it's transforming so that the after effects of a bullet are seen leaving the gun, the game will freeze up in that closeup mode. Just thought you'd want to know.

Besides those comments, great game.

[Being One]

Good game but problems

The game was good, graphics were great. However, I had to restart after first putting in a wrong name into the computer. When I did that, I could no longer type anything. Secondly, when I accidientally picked up the key after using it, the key was automatically stuck to the pointer, making me unable to complete the game. A good game but marred by some techincal errors

Psionic3D responds:

You're correct, FIXED KEY PROBLEM - please refresh

Not sure about the name though, normally you can just click in the input box, delete and re-input the proper password!!

[Sparks and Dust]

Interesting take

I was confused about if there was attacking but once I figured it out, it was very good. The only thing I might change is having the downward hit assigned to another button. I would think I could triple jump only to fall down. Probably just me, but it would make the experience better.

[Alice is Dead]

Very nice

Your voice is very good. It sounds different than the usual lounge music in that there's a dark twist to it that works. Probably gonna see if you have done anything else now. Again, great job!

[Cat Fight]

Ow looks like it hurts!

Anyways, nice job with the grainy texture. Besides the old cartoons, usually the xmen have a lot more clear distinct lines with bright colors. This just looks brutal in a good way with the unrefined texture.

Once again, very nice!

[Left 4 Dead]

So let's get it straight

Francis deserves to die, Zoey can probably touch her toes, Bill found his path in life again, and Louis just say Bill shoot the Witch.

Besides that, very nice job. What exactly did you use to make it?

Tsentachi responds:

Only Paintshop Pro 9 :o